Writing is a way to express my views and feelings on
a particular subject. I believe that visual writing is my strong suit. When
writing, I try to show someone what I am thinking by painting a picture with words
in their mind. This blog will hopefully ignite the flame of inspiration that I
have for my job and show everyone what the qualifications and dedication it
takes to have that job.
The perfect job for me is to own a business. I want
to make a bunch of money by becoming a professional cook, and then opening my
own restaurant and coffee/bakery lounge. In order for that to happen, I need a
business degree, and go to culinary school. Through all that hard work and
time, I hope to accomplish my dreams and have the job that I wished for.
Cooking for me is a personal interest that has been
in my mind for a long time. Since I was a child I was interested in culinary.
Only recently have I decided to take an interest in pursuing it as a career
rather than a hobby. My parents always said that to take a career in culinary I
would have to take a major in business as well. This struck me as a great idea,
not only to cook for a job, but to own a business too. This was the spark to my
flame of passion for culinary and business. This persistent flame has led me to
where I am today.
I really like your style of writing, it's personal and very easy to understand. I think you had some great work choice, especially in the first paragraph. A little repetitive at some points, but overall, very nice!
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